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Also, giving a +0 LA race telepathy and (even a short-range) teleport abilities is bad.
 
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Revision as of 12:32, 12 September 2012

Ratings

RatedNeutral.png DeeNoir is neutral on this article and rated it 2 of 4.
Might still need work, and seems to be a first time attempt at creating a race.
RatedLike.png Ghostwheel likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
Much better now with the changes. Flavor's good too.
RatedOppose.png ThunderGod Cid opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.
Even though this appears to be a different version that my compatriots rated, this is a dangerous mix right here. Yes, it has penalties. And debilitating ones, at that; being dazed pretty much whenever you're around someone of significant Intelligence is just silly, because then your party wizard is going to be giving you migraines 24/7. So unless you surround yourself with a party of retards, that's not going to fly.

Second, calm emotions ends encounters. Giving it as an SLA or whatever useable at will is ridiculous.

RatedLike.png Eiji-kun likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
From the ashes, it rises again. And honestly... I'm proud of you. Seriously. It's good now. Well, it needs some fluff text, but mechanically it is now sound. The fact it went from BIG NO to "hey not bad" brings it to Like status. Good job.
RatedOppose.png Leziad opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.
Outsider is not a subtype, perception is not a skill, telepathy don't work that way, you die no save if you remain in mountainous region for too long, emphatic aura is broke, fluff is barebone.

The spell-like ability ALONE make me hate this, the other flaws don't help at all. Teleport and HEAL should never be handed at 1st level, ESPECIALLY the former... and it usable at-will.

Overall the race is overpowered for it LA, yet most of it racial traits are broken and the wording is terrible on all count.


Teleport AT WIll?

For a LA 0 race? Really? Really? --Leziad 10:12, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

Since it's improved so, I put on OldRating markers since it IS pretty different now. -- Eiji-kun 12:22, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
Facts about "Safir (3.5e Race)"
LikedGhostwheel + and Eiji-kun +
NeutralDeeNoir +
OpposedThunderGod Cid + and Leziad +