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User talk:Luigifan18/Ukemi (3.5e Feat)

149 bytes added, 22:26, 17 August 2013
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:::::I think you could make it much shorter without making it any less clear. For example, spring off wall and soften fall are really the same thing, except with different orientation of surface. You could put it into terms of how many dice of damage one takes instead of separating it out. Further, rather than elaborate on the circumstance bonuses, you could just include them as numeric values in each effect. I could probably cut this down to about 1000 words if you were okay with that. --[[User:Maninorange|Maninorange]] ([[User talk:Maninorange|talk]]) 22:19, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
 
::::::I would be curious to see how that turned out... --[[User:Luigifan18|Luigifan18]] ([[User talk:Luigifan18|talk]]) 22:26, 17 August 2013 (UTC)
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