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== Ratings ==
{{Rating |rater=Aarnott
|rating=neutrallike
|reason=Flavor: Well, as a greater version of another spell, this isn't a big deal. It isn't any better or worse, which is fine.
Mechanics: It seems 1 spell level too high (at least). CL 10 would have dimension door at 800 ft. and this at 200 ft. per jump for 20 rounds. Using multiple actions you can get 600 ft. per round, and probably use up all the duration to bring passengers. So it isn't strictly better (which is probably what you thought when leveling it at 5). Your example for the multiple jumps is inconsistent with the text. A move action jump takes 0 rounds away from the spell's duration (for the first move action), so the second should cost 1 round from the duration. Meaning you reduce the duration by 1 round and also spending a round doing these actions will also take away 1 round of duration. Formatting: Might be nice to use a bulleted list like Sulacu did.Looks good now
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