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:: A cat is fine too. --[[User:Ghostwheel|Ghostwheel]] ([[User talk:Ghostwheel|talk]]) 17:02, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
== Paragraph structure is confusing ==
This is a cool feat, but it's a little confusing as-written. It took me 3 read-throughs to completely understand what was going on. I think this could benefit from some rewording, adding a semi-descriptive line at the beginning and reordering the words so the whole process is chronological:
"As an immediate action, you can make a fort save to reduce damage you take from a non-touch attack. The DC is equal to the damage roll, and if you roll a 16 or higher your save is an automatic success. If you succeed at the save, halve the damage or reduce it by your BAB (whichever is better). If you fail, simply reduce the damage by your BAB."
