Talk:Safir (3.5e Race)

Ratings

Foxwarrior likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.

If you're afraid of having your friends complain that it's too strong, well, instantly getting the third round of Detect Thoughts might be a bit on the extreme side, in tense potentially pre-combat situations. This should probably be compared to Gray Elves. The thing you did with the extra arms is remarkably sane, I think; I wonder how it works with gloves and rings. The racial traits section could be shorter, and the description sections could be longer. I'm curious as to how a race with the gender balance of a pride of lions ends up being matriarchal.

Blocked Rating

ThunderGod Cid is neutral on this article and rated it 2 of 4.

This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.tl;dr: The powers are OK, I just want to see the excess trimmed. I don't agree with having all of the ability score bonuses on top of all the powers; I think dumping one in favor of the other (read: the powers should be kept at the expense of all the ability score changes, positive or negative). I also think the constant empathy still has a pretty good chance to shaft you (if your enemy has a bag of awakened rats, as it were), especially if you have to make a separate save for each suitably intelligent creature that dies, even in the same turn.

Blocked Rating	Aarnott likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.Looks like a great race to play out of the box. I like the fact that it offers out of combat abilities that won't break the game, but will certainly offer something new that other races don't.

Blocked Rating	Havvy likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.A nice race that is neither overpowered nor underpowered with a psionic twist and some story hooks.

Blocked Rating	DeeNoir is neutral on this article and rated it 2 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.Might still need work, and seems to be a first time attempt at creating a race.

	Ghostwheel is neutral on this article and rated it 2 of 4.
	Seems fine, the teleportation thing is interesting, but the flavor doesn't really draw me into the race.

Blocked Rating	Eiji-kun likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.From the ashes, it rises again. And honestly... I'm proud of you. Seriously. It's good now. Well, it needs some fluff text, but mechanically it is now sound. The fact it went from BIG NO to "hey not bad" brings it to Like status. Good job.

Blocked Rating	Leziad likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.Pretty much like Eiji, the dead links are a bit annoying though.

Teleport at will?

For a LA 0 race? Really? Really? --Leziad 10:12, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

Since it's improved so, I put on OldRating markers since it IS pretty different now. -- Eiji-kun 12:22, 12 September 2012 (UTC)