Talk:Safir (3.5e Race)

Ratings

{{Rating |rater=Foxwarrior |rating=like |reason=If you're afraid of having your friends complain that it's too strong, well, instantly getting the third round of Detect Thoughts might be a bit on the extreme side, in tense potentially pre-combat situations. This should probably be compared to Gray Elves. The thing you did with the extra arms is remarkably sane, I think; I wonder how it works with gloves and rings.

The racial traits section could be shorter, and the description sections could be longer.

I'm curious as to how a race with the gender balance of a pride of lions ends up being matriarchal. |block=NewVersion

Blocked Rating	Aarnott likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.Looks like a great race to play out of the box. I like the fact that it offers out of combat abilities that won't break the game, but will certainly offer something new that other races don't.

Blocked Rating	Havvy likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.A nice race that is neither overpowered nor underpowered with a psionic twist and some story hooks.

Blocked Rating	DeeNoir is neutral on this article and rated it 2 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.Might still need work, and seems to be a first time attempt at creating a race.

Blocked Rating	Ghostwheel is neutral on this article and rated it 2 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.Seems fine, the teleportation thing is interesting, but the flavor doesn't really draw me into the race.

Blocked Rating	Eiji-kun likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.From the ashes, it rises again. And honestly... I'm proud of you. Seriously. It's good now. Well, it needs some fluff text, but mechanically it is now sound. The fact it went from BIG NO to "hey not bad" brings it to Like status. Good job.

Blocked Rating	Leziad likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.Pretty much like Eiji, the dead links are a bit annoying though.

Blocked Rating	Franken Kesey opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.Detect thoughts, 4 arms and trance. Also many other mental abilities without balance. Worse than before.

Teleport at will?

For a LA 0 race? Really? Really? --Leziad 10:12, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

Since it's improved so, I put on OldRating markers since it IS pretty different now. -- Eiji-kun 12:22, 12 September 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it's a +1 now. Halian (talk) 03:26, 18 October 2013 (UTC)