Talk:Safir (3.5e Race)

Ratings

	Foxwarrior likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	If you're afraid of having your friends complain that it's too strong, well, this time they would almost certainly be wrong. The racial traits section could be shorter, and the description sections could be longer. I'm curious as to how a race with the gender balance of a pride of lions ends up being matriarchal.

	Aarnott is neutral on this article and rated it 2 of 4.
	I don't remember what it was like before, but I feel that it is too weak now. Four arms is always a tricky business. It merits the LA + 1, but the other abilities would have been fine with LA +0. I think it's a bit low-powered for a LA+1, but a bit high-powered for a LA+0. The fluff/roleplaying abilities are decent. The description could be more fleshed out.

	Havvy likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	The abilities are fine for an LA+1 race, though level adjustment isn't fun. The abilities are flavorful, and actually makes you feel like you are playing a psionic. I actually read the descriptions for once, and well, they gave me questions about why that it. Now that the balance around abilities has been reached, it'd be nice to see the lore expanded upon.

	DeeNoir is neutral on this article and rated it 2 of 4.
	Might still need work, and seems to be a first time attempt at creating a race.

Blocked Rating	Ghostwheel is neutral on this article and rated it 2 of 4.
	This rating refers to a substantially different version of the article, or concerns mentioned in it have already been addressed.Seems fine, the teleportation thing is interesting, but the flavor doesn't really draw me into the race.

	Eiji-kun likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	From the ashes, it rises again. And honestly... I'm proud of you. Seriously. It's good now. Well, it needs some fluff text, but mechanically it is now sound. The fact it went from BIG NO to "hey not bad" brings it to Like status. Good job.

	Leziad likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	Pretty much like Eiji, the dead links are a bit annoying though.

	Franken Kesey dislikes this article and rated it 1 of 4.
	Detect thoughts, 4 arms and trance. Also many other mental abilities without balance. Worse than before. The empathy and trance are still too potent for 1 LA. But better than before. (Side note (that has no affect on this rating): could use more flavor.)

Teleport at will?

For a LA 0 race? Really? Really? --Leziad 10:12, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

Since it's improved so, I put on OldRating markers since it IS pretty different now. -- Eiji-kun 12:22, 12 September 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it's a +1 now. Halian (talk) 03:26, 18 October 2013 (UTC)