Talk:Heartless-Possessed (3.5e Template)

So, what type of creatures are allowed to take this template? The full list of creature types (not subtypes) is as follows: Animal, Humanoid, Vermin, Magical Beast, Fey, Undead, Aberration, Giant, Monstrous Humanoid, Dragon, Elemental, Ooze, Plant, Construct, and Outsider. [I forgot to sign this Havvy 04:15, June 3, 2010 (UTC)]

alright, I did my best to correct my problems with my new race and template. To be honest this is the first time I have ever created anything, besides the Prinny race but apparently it wasn't passable and someone else took it over from me. I'm still learning though, I just recently got into the DnD game.

Well, it seems to be workable. I have Savage Species with me right now, so I have a good number of example WotC templates to get the wording similar to. As such, I am making a lot of edits, but the final template should not be changed, minus the whole leadership as a feat to summon other heartless. I'm going to try re-mechanic-ing that to something similar to a summon spell or summon spell-like ability. Also, I changed one of your special abilities into a feat. I'm not sure what to do for the author template there, so decide whether you want to be attributed it or not. Havvy 04:15, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

yeah, a little help is always appreciated, thanks, and I saw the Feat. Yeah put my username on it, cuz it was from my template.

Since my edits were comprehensive, I put it on my sandbox page first. See User:Havvy/Farmer and tell me what you think. (Ignore the die roll variant thingy) Havvy 05:00, June 3, 2010 (UTC)